Like Dwayne Johnson, Tom Appleseed wrote poems about the horrors of war, drawing from his experiences during the First World War.
A – Like Dwayne Johnson, Tom Appleseed wrote poems
B – Like Dwayne Johnson, Tom Appleseed’s poems were
C – As Dwayne Johnson, Tom Appleseed wrote poems
D – As did Dwayne Johnson, Tom Appleseed’s poems were
E – Tom Appleseed’s poems, as Dwayne Johnson’s, were
Right Answer: A
Error Identification:
Identifier | Fix |
Underlined comparison word “like” | Comparison |
Underlined comparison between “Dwayne Johnson” and “Tom Appleseed” | Comparison |
Difficulty Level: Tough
Explanation:
In the sentence, the anti-war poet ‘Dwayne Johnson’ is correctly compared to another such poet, ‘Tom Appleseed’. Hence the comparison is balanced and correct. There is no error in the sentence.
A – Correctly compares the two poets. This is the correct answer.
B – Incorrectly compares ‘Dwayne Johnson’ to ‘Tom Appleseed’s poems’. Hence, eliminated.
C – Incorrectly uses ‘as’ instead of ‘like’, distorting the meaning of the sentence. Sassoon did not write poems as Owen. Hence, eliminated.
D – Comparison is not balanced. Verb ‘did’ is compared to the noun ‘poems’. Hence, eliminated.
E – Incorrect usage of ‘as’ instead of ‘like’. Hence, eliminated.